Near the dawn of time-
From nothing, only a prayer,
man and death are born
After battle's end-
Lush green land is fertilised
by bodies of men
End of days today-
Upon mount of frozen time
all is white with snow.
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Written September 14th, 2006
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Understand the struggles of our existance, and, welcome to the Winter of our societies. Very crisply written. Thank God for the coming Spring! Much liked, poet. Well done.
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An enjoyable write
An enjoyable write; your sense of humor came through in the second haiku; nicely done. Perhaps you would like my poem called "Dust" which has some humor sprinkled throughout.
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good write
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