Don’t hush little emo girl,
Cry your eyes out now.
Tomorrow may be worse,
I know you want to know how.
The sun won’t shine,
All we’ll get is rain.
And since you’re so emo now,
You’ll want to be hit by a train.
Oh, little emo girl,
Please give me a smile.
If you do,
Then I wont be worried for a while.
I wont think of you killing yourself,
Swallowing a bunch of pills.
Because when I think of that,
It gives me a case of chills.
Now, now, little emo girl,
Why did you leave?
I guess since you’re dead now,
I’d better go and grieve.
Author notes
A Gothic Lullabay.....Not A Very Great One I Must Say, But I Think Its Very Entertaining.
Written September 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- 203;::A.n.o.r.e.x.i.c...S.u.i.c.i.d.a.l...D.r.u.g...A.d.d.i.c.t:: by Bullet To The Head.
300 points, ended October 25, 2006, 85 entries
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qutie intresting indeed...
"Oh, little emo girl,
Please give me a smile.
If you do,
Then I wont be worried for a while."
--loved that stanza.
this is a nice dark deep piece and kinda sad, but hte ending made me think otherwise, like you were trying to be sarcastic in a say way or just being like F** it...
"I guess since you’re dead now,
I’d better go and grieve."
thanks for sharing this piece with me and taking th time to enter my contest!
take care and keep writing!
♥ Lynn -
Oh this was great, I can barely keep from falling out of my chair with laughter, as I absolutely love making fun of irritating little angst filled emo teenagers. I have got to say that you have made my day with this write, dripping with sarcasm, it was awesome.
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i ike how you made it stilhave a little bit or the same as the orig. "hush little baby"
Good Luck!
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