Dear Daddy,
The pain
The Hurt
And the tears
Are forever etched in my mind
Dear Daddy,
The yelling
The screaming
And evil words
Are forever ringing in my ears
Dear Daddy,
The unspoken "I love yous"
The hugs forgotten
And the missed dance recitals
Are forever going to leave a hole in my heart
Dear Daddy,
I wish you could have loved me
And I wish you could have cared
I wish you didn't put me through
Everything you put me through
But most of all
I wish you could have been there when I needed you the most
Author notes
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Written September 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- So This Isn't A Great Title x♥x [Contest] by E t e r n i t y.
500 points, ended October 21, 2006, 38 entries
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Hm ... Very nicely written. I'm sorry you had to go through this girl. I never knew. And no one ever told me. But I'm glad we're friends and all. I love you. And I'm here for you if you ever need me.
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<3
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Wow... this brought tears to my eyes. I'm sorry you had to go through this, I know exactly how you feel, all too well... after we have been kicked down and put down so much, the only way to go is up. For something short and simple, you put a lot of feelings and sorrow in it. I have written so many poems to my father about this subject... anyways, great write
Jeanette*~ -
This is very sad. It reminds me of my father...
Keep up the killer work and take care
~ImmortalUndead~ -
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...That's so sad.
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