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I actually love you

The possibilities of love
wash around my world
I can feel you leaving me, while you speak i love you
You showed me what life was, you cared for me when i was sick
But when you left that night, i was stuck here to get myself up.
Why you crawled back to me I'll never know
What was it all for, did all of it make your day
You cracked my heart, and for what its worth
i actually f ucking loved you, i actually love you.

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Written September 13th, 2006

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  • heaven in handguns
    July 27, 2007
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    tragic darling.


  • imlost
    September 13, 2006
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    thank you so much for the comment. it's comforting to know
    someone else can relate.

  • Rose-Of-My-Heart
    September 13, 2006
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    Really good poem, i can relate to it as well. Short but simple and deep very good at describing the feelings sent out in this poem keep up the great work and keep writing.