speak of perfection-
yet wreak of procrastination
pitiful-
partaking in your parched prospects
your property,
raise the awareness of your popularity
then plead with no principle
a proposition: a punching bag
embrace the pleasure
your pathetic, aching promise
Author notes
Let's just say...I am happy being the dead weight.
Written September 13th, 2006
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nice
great alliteration used here. short but effectively done.
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Wonderous job Kate. I <3 you m'dear.
~Krishell -
well, i'm doing english homework now, so i'll note the parallelism and repitition in your poem here... horrah for literary devices! very well written. *smiles*
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