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the moonlight queen

when i lived on the moon
there was a beautiful queen
when i was on the earth
i couldn't see my people
i could never go there again
sometimes i wish i was just a normal girl without this crystal

i tried to get my crystal to luna
but the cat never took it
i know I'm sailor s and I'm the protector of the earth and moon
i had a love, darian, he is casido mask
sometimes when i turn into sailor s
i remember my moon kingdom
my friend feorya joins me too

she and i were best friends who have crystals
she changes into sailor feoriya and i to sailor s
sometimes she gets into her own fights
and i get into mine
but I'm weak without her help
this time the negaverse came back
they had a fire guy who was aiming at a poor little girl

so i had to jump in the path of the flame and hurt myself
knowing that it was a terrible thing to do
when feyoriya got into trouble
sailor s tried to call her
she didn't change back to her normal self
together they defeated the negaverse
and she found casido mask and they were both hurt

she had to do this , it was her birth right
she cried and cried
the told one another that they loved each other

and got married and lived happily ever after on the moon

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Written September 13th, 2006

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  • Enchanted Butterfly
    September 15, 2006
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    I got to say, I do love Sailor Moon, love how you put this. But unfortunately that's not what I'm looking for in this contest. But thank you for entering anyways!

  • pozo
    September 14, 2006
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    Interesting poem. 'I' always needs capitalising I've noticed you've done this sometimes in the poem but other times you've not. Keep writing, this was a very good narrative poem.
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo