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The Gardener

Hopes and dreams:
A future of curing,
Caring and tending for
My very own roots,
The health of those
Who birthed me,
And everyone's seedlings,
The little buds
I hope will flower.

Author notes

wrote this in my english journal today... or something like it... theme today was about what we thought we'd be like 10 years from now. i really want to go into the medical field, especially cancer, since both of my grandpas have cancer, and one of them actually has two. so yeah...
Written September 13th, 2006

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  • Shakes-spear
    August 20

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    hello

    sorry to hear about your family. i hope that you do go into medicne as we don't have enough good docters! Good luck in life and with college! The Shaker


  • Amicus2K9
    September 13, 2006
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    This is very nicely done, even more so after your author's comments...and curing and caring...the gardener, a deft touch...good on you!

    amicus...