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No kidding?

You didna say that splling

Was of th’ SNs @

Or xclood moby shortning

Or, as an alias, “Shamir”.

 

So I’ll go right on

And right and right

Right out of sight

And carry on

 

Until 12 rows of words R writ,

All full, chock full, of awful sh*t

At which, I’ll stop, if you’ll allow

For that is all I’m doing now.

Author notes

All writ without the forbidd'n thing. Should you wish, you could probably disqualify this.
Written September 13th, 2006

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  • Ninth-Poet
    October 3, 2006
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    intriguingly interesting

    interesting piece of poetry. It is quite uniquely different from what I typically read.

    _keep the ink flowing!
    -Dave


  • solarjinx
    September 13, 2006
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    Disqualify? Not a chance. This is a great example of what I wanted to see. I smiled as I read through it and I'm still smiling now, nicely done!


  • chills gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    eeeeeh heeeeck - that were good babeeeeeeeeeee


  • September 13, 2006
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    this is clever. I loved it. Good luck in the contest