All eyes are on you
Watching your every move
You can't seem to get
Out of the lime light
Everyone adores you
So you don't want to
Let them down
Do you?
You skip a meal here and there
No big deal
You want to be comforted
So you go a little crazy
A new forbidden substance
Every night
Just for the hell of it
Then people assume
You're easy
Or really carefree
All eyes are still on you
As you vomit what you just ate
Or pass out because you
Had too much
And you pretend that everything
Is OK
You can't escape it
You're trapped
Author notes
Written September 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- [oh those.CRAZY.things you do.] by Calligraphy.
350 points, ended September 16, 2006, 4 entries
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Comments
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That is very sad... mainly because it's true. Crazy teenagers. I thought it was a little choppy, and not as poetic as I would have liked, but overall, it was still a good, solid poem and it got the point across. Good job, and good luck.
<3Hannah -
Aw a sad, truthful, heart wrentching write.
<333 I like it
goodluck in this contest
Kat
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