One could ask God why you had to leave.
But i doubt God even knows.
It wasn't supposed to happen this way.
The dream I lived now a night-mare.
my heart now cold.
The light in my world has gone out.
Not a flicker of hope remains,
Left alone to wander in the darkness;
I wonder what i did.
What made your love come to an end?
What could i have done to change your mind?
Countless regrets, so many tears.
I wish i could have had more time.
But you have cut our time short.
agian
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Written September 13th, 2006
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I like this Katie It is kind of like the end of the rope poem that everyone has felt at some point when they lose someone special to them good job
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Again*
Sorry it's the English major in me
This is brilliant, I really love it.
The little suggestion thing is saying to point out bits that I don't like or sound awkward and I'm looking.... yup I don't see any
Beautiful Sorrow, that's what I love about this.
Great write Poet.
Jai.
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jesus katie...
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