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Darksadness

Deep, the words that come from his soul,
Amongst the many emotions that he holds.
Restricted by his heart, not sure where to turn,
Keeping faith, for it's in what he must learn.
Searching for that one small puzzle piece,
Answers soon to come at him with ease.
Deprived of what so many others know,
Never sure in which direction he needs to go.
Emerge my dear, a new heart so very pure,
Somewhere in the universe, soon to find the cure.
Smile for the new day, and be sad no more.

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For you my dear.
Written September 13th, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 13, 2006
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    Thank you Vickie. He is a wonderful person.

    Storm

  • Night Valkyrie
    September 13, 2006
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    A great tribute to your knew God, very touching and full of love. I'm glad you've picked him hon.

    My love to you
    Vickie

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 13, 2006
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    Hardly third grader love, emotion, and that makes a big difference. You write with emotion. But thank you for the compliment.

  • Darksadness
    September 13, 2006
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    yes speechless, got great talent, me next to you makes my poems third grader writing it and you a college professor

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 13, 2006
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    Dark is my AP God of Elements, the winnder from the contest I had. Thanks for the comments Kari, appreciated.

    Storm

  • Hekate gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    Loved It!

    This was so sweet and precious. I don't know the poet either but you've done a wonderful job here You have such a wonderful heart

    Kari

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 13, 2006
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    Speechless huh? Hmmm

    Thank you sweetie, appreciate your comment. Glad you like.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 13, 2006
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    Thanks Anne, most appreciated.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 13, 2006
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    Thank you Krystal, appreciate your words.

    Storm

  • Darksadness
    September 13, 2006
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    *long sigh*awwww gee thanks think its great....Im actually speechless, a feat thats hard to do, but you have done it.

  • dutch2lips
    September 13, 2006
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    Oh woman, so much love in you
    I am so proud to be your sis
    My love to you
    Anne

  • greyhaime
    September 13, 2006
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    aaawwwww, this is beautiful,, I am afraid I do not know the poet for whom you penned this but well done...
    you make it look easy to do acrostics..

    Krystal
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