Servitude by Celticmoon at All poetry

It was You who.....

Invited me into an energetic blending

woven to celestial perfection;

Lifted me upon healing wings

of an enlightened journey;

Baptized me in silken ropes

delicately knotted in trust;

Branded me by lusting flames

of domineering passions;

Enveloped me in a blanket

of satin love divine;

Submersed me in a sea

of submissive gratitude;

And now,

it is to You...

I love

I trust

I serve

eternally!

Author notes

For my Master, Blazing White Wolf

Written September 13th, 2006

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Blazing White Wolf
March 9, 2007

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wow! I read this a couple times and I was sure I had commented this is beautiful My lioness and trust and vulnerablity is the key and strength of said relationship this really touched me the first time I read it just as it does now

love,
Master
slipperssun
March 4, 2007

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This is a loving tribute to your master of your eternal servitude. i wish you well in the contest
cheers
Jen
deleteit
February 26, 2007

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"Baptized me in silken ropes delicately knotted in trust" This line grabbed me so deeply, I think because it just threw me so far back into remembering the awakening of my own heart and soul. Your write, I don't think I have ever heard it put into words so delicately, so sweetly...breathtaking. Thanks so much for entering this and best wishes in this contest
Sacrificial Love
February 25, 2007

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So beautifully written...
and a bond that is so strong.
I love the words you use to so perfectly describe the ultimate trust and security.

Beautiful.

Heidi
naked roots
December 19, 2006
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A beautiful poem, I loved it. There was such a passionate, tender and loving feel to this. I think these lines were great:
"Baptized me in silken ropes
delicately knotted in trust;"
I bet the one this was written for was very honored. Thank you very much for entering into my contest.
Kari
October 1, 2006
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hmmm
This was very good..I loved the graphic

Kari
Touchof1der
September 21, 2006
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The chains of passion and pleasure bind us to the touch of another, but they never hurt or inflict pain. I do like the sensuous flavor of your words here. This inspired me with thoughts all of my own creating so many thanks for this one. This was penned with a masterful flair that was quite appealing and not easily accomplished as witnessed by the so-so poetry that one often falls upon here. Great job! Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
♥ Touchof1der
sarajaneUK
September 16, 2006
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The essence of these kinds of feelings, i think, are very difficult to capute effectively, but you did a great job with this. Great stuff. sj
Kari
September 14, 2006
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Deep
ooooooooooooo I lovedddd this part right here....
Lifted me upon healing wings
of an enlightened journey

Kari
Silence of Finality
September 13, 2006
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Bel, this piece gracefully expressed your feelings of gratitude both from a standpoint of the person being healed and also as a grateful submissive. I loved the font you chose, it's casual but romantic as well. I'm sure your Master Blaze is both proud and touched.
The Poetic Angel
September 13, 2006
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very very nice ,,,love the style as well .smiles ~cheeky~
gypsyfish
September 13, 2006
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good write
this was inspirational. good writing. love GYPSY
Mother Angst
September 13, 2006
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interesting take on being in love. well written!
soulfultia
September 13, 2006
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imaginative
Good write great visual and flow, the whole poem just came together creating an imaginative vision and expression. Good work! Thanks for sharing.
ehstt
September 13, 2006
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Truly wonderful. Love the expressions.
Chaotic Prophet
September 13, 2006
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This is a good peice. The imagery is great. Love has dealt me a few blows to the heart in the past, so I'm touchy on the subject. I'm truly glad your love rings true,well, so it seems from the peice.
All I can say is great job on the word usage, and imagery.
tomisb
September 13, 2006
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I like this. First because it doesn't need the picture. Second because it works with double innuendo and allusion to create a deeper and more sensual erotic work. This makes it, by the nature of the beast, seductive, tantilizing, provocative. I am truly impressed. You might like this poem of mine done in a similar vein. allpoetry.com/Poem/1926458 "A slave to love"
Love, Tom B.
Heavenly Angel
September 13, 2006
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Awesomely done, Bel! This speaks of love and loyalty to the nth degree; I love it! All the best to you in the contest!
Disturbed Prodigy
September 13, 2006
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wow, celtic if i may call you that wow, you did a great job on this, it just felt so good, so golden, you have done wonderfully in expressing your feelings , keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
starwing
September 13, 2006
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lovely piece celtic...and worthy of blaze.... hope he is doing well as are you...peace and harmony...shzoosy
AngelicMistress
September 13, 2006
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AWESOME JOB!!!!! ENJOYED IT!!!!!
Celticmoon

Hi I had not seen you for a while.....

This is a great piece......

Very intense and thoughtprovoking..... clear, and the imagery, feelings of love and loyalty, felt through and through.....

Thanks for sharing with me on this site......

Be blessed with love an light always.....

Glad to see you back.....

Your friend,
AngelicMistress
KnightRhymer
September 13, 2006
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Nice. Very nice work, Celtic. The emotions are warmly shown and the desire to please as well. Wonderfully done. Good luck to you in the contest.