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fly away

alone apart away from loved hearts
strain and stress wreak their hell
wishing to God that heaven will go better
technology tells you what to do
a way for release far from here
do what you can to survive

broken wings will mend
broken hearts will end
sanity will free you
help you to fly away

from here to there and back again
pointless life sacred over less
swirls separate your life from ours
hold you high above your strife
winged beauty we protect your life

spread your wings and stretch your legs
open your cage and coax you out
fly free away from your hell
fly free from our ability to tell
fly free

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Written September 13th, 2006

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  • Kari gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    This was very sweet. Thanks for taking the time to do this. I loved how you made the poem go around my name The best of luck to u in the contest.

    Kari