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Kari

Those who don't know you
Undermine your abilities
Those who hold grudges
Deny all of your strength
But nothing can change
What we know about you...
Kari, this one's for you

Once upon a time
In a poetry land
I met a woman
Who brightened my day
And talking to her
Made my pain wash away
And her humour amazed
And the depth of her heart
Her kindness will ensure
That we never drift apart
For never will I meet anyone
Nor is there anyone I know
Just like my dear sister
Whose talented words flow
Whose strentgh is legendary
Waiting yet to be told
And her words comforting
Like a blanket when cold

Kari, this one's for you...
Don't you ever forget
No matter how bad
Things may appear
Don't worry too much
Tell me every fear
Because forever and always
I am right here



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Justin, Amber, sorry, I had to use a heart and this was the only one I could find and no one has a flower on their page
Written September 13th, 2006

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  • Erotik Rose silver member
    September 30, 2006
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    Theses were wonderful word for Kari, she deserves the best.
    Congrats on the Bronze.


  • catz Moderators member
    September 29, 2006
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    What a unique and lovely poem, rooibos. The heart is perfect with it

    You've expressed whar many of us have come to feel about our Kari, she's such a special person

    Congratulations on winning the Bronze

    Dee


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 29, 2006
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    Congratulations on winning bronze in this contest. VEry well don- the shape of the heart was wondeful.


  • Walking shadow
    September 13, 2006
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    AWESOME!

    Very touching and sweet poem!! Reading this touched my heart and made me feel great to see the compassion shown in this piece!
    We need more of that in this world.


  • Kari gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    Love You!

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I Loveddddddddd this thank u so much Lil sis...this was so precious...
    Best of luck to you in the contest hun.

    Kari


  • Firequeen
    September 13, 2006
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    This is beautiful and so touching.
    ty so much for your beautiful words.
    Firequeen

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