I feel aweful,
totally retained,
inside these walls I have built,
up around myself,
to hide from you.
I feel alone,
totally deserted
inside a world,
you isolated from your own,
you ran away.
I feel broken,
torn in two,
now three,
for only trying to figure
both you and I out.
I feel ashamed,
clothes hangs wrong,
words fall out in turrents,
they are all disordered,
and I fall on my face again...
I feel dirty,
as the sting of your words
take hold on my unsuspecting heart,
your look of resentment,
your feelings of abandonment..'
I feel rejected,
as all those I love fall away
and they all see right through me,
I want only to please them,
but they all walk away.
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something about how i feel
Written September 13th, 2006
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awww well I am glad that I can write things that catch your interest and that you can relate to that makes me feel better
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touching
those we hold closest to the heart always cause the most pain. but this poem is so full of emotion, it seems to reach from the page into my feelings. anyway, this is very well expressed, keep it up!
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