IN HER WORDS:
Am I supposed to say sorry to you
Since I went and left again
Because of that girl?
~
You just walked away
Left me silently
To die here
All alone
So cold.
~
My heart was torn
From my chest
You took it
Stabbed it
And left
Again.
~
This time I've learned
And never again
Will I ever
Fall for
You...
_-_To the one she loved to hate_-_
IN HIS WORDS:
It wasn't what you had thought it was
All I did was give her my blue coat
And you went and freaked out on me
Well you know I am really sorry
That you thought that stuff
But you W.E.R.E. wrong
To think I was drunk
But still forgive me
~
Well, you left me
Took Flight
I'm never
To see
You...
~
When all I ever wanted was to be with you...
_-_To the one he hated to love_-_
Author notes
I didn't really think about this poem much, it all just came to my head really quickly so I wrote it down... I'd really appreciate the comment...
-Ashley
Written September 12th, 2006
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Comments
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Hey girl, long time no chat. How does it feel to talk to a dead person? Yeah thats right I am dead, I killed myself through a series of mistakes and ignorance. It's a lot like this poem actually. The stabbing was a nice touch. You have a few mistakes to look into, just spelling and grammar. I like it. Keep writing and posting.
~kar -
It's very interesting i like it though great job i like how it was written simple and makes sense good job.
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