Through the country’s hardships I want to be,
something more than anyone can see.
I want to be the one next to many others.
Ones that could die, that I call brothers.
I want to take the challenge and prove to be better.
All though for a while all I can send is a letter.
To keep the name of freedom alive,
as well as keeping my own eternal drive.
For I will make it and in the end stand tall.
It is a decision that I will always be able to recall.
I want to explore my limits, my fate, and everything between.
For I want to be a part of something, I want to be a marine.
Author notes
This is my first non-dark poetry.
Written September 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Passion by Rhythm Child.
550 points, ended December 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i dont have a clue what happened there
lol
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Rhythm Child
November 24
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Edit | Reply A great entry
thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care
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Billy (Rhythm Child)
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