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Christmas

Christmas means alot to me
especially when I see my tree.
It has an angel without a wing
and a bell that doesn't ring.
It has a boat that has losted it's sail
and a mouse without his tail.
But that's ok can't you see
my children made these things for me.

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Written September 12th, 2006

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  • gullionmar
    February 2, 2007

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    VERY CUTE

    WHAT A WAY TO SEE YOUR PRECIOUS TREE FOR ALL THE THINGS YOU SPEAK OF WERE MADE FOR YOU WITH LOVE GREAT JOB SIS

  • gullionmar
    September 12, 2006
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    very well written sis hand made things by our kids can never bee replaced by store bought things keep up the lovely writing

  • June-bug
    September 12, 2006
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    Excellent

    Very aswsome. As a mother myself I understand how treasured those little trinkets are. Wonderful write as we start to get into the Christmas Frame of mine.