Nestled inside of my heart,
Between yesterday
And today,
An angel resides.
With a love so true,
Her wings are open wide.
Waiting to help me through,
Across to the other side.
Now it seems she has nothing to do,
Today, I'm sending her to you.
Take her hand,
Let her help you through.
With her she brings
A prayer from my heart.
A prayer said daily
For you.
With her she brings my love,
Wrap it around you,
In your time of need.
Let it be a safety net
In your time of fear.
She'll have a rose for you from me,
To plant in your heart,
To remind you each day,
That come what may,
I'll love you forever and a day.
Author notes
Lionslove,
Hope you are feeling better soon. I love you!
Option 3 Angels
Written September 11th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- ANYTHING! by Beating.
1300 points, ended September 13, 2007, 103 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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aw....sweet. it had a nice flow and strucutre, nothing flashy but it works well.
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This is a beautiful poem. Very well structured etc. although I think line 9 could do without the comma at the end of it...
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Beautifully written my Sister...
I can feel your love here so much...
Simon
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Thanks my Brother. This took a lot for me to write. Worked on it for quite a while. and now I sit and cry, as My Angel, now his, carried him to another plane...
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A very beautiful and emotion-packed piece. Good luck in the contest!!
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Thanks for the comment on this one. One of the hardest ones I have ever written.
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this is so sweet and beautiful. I really love the concept. Sending an angel from your heart, to protect the other. I like how you start almost every verse with what the angel will do. So well written!
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Thanks for the great comment. This was a very hard one for me to write. Thanks for the honorable win on it!
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Wonderful
A beautiful and touching poem of love and well wishes.
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Thanks for the wonderful comment on this one. The hardest one I have ever had to write. Broke my heart writing this one.
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Thanks Desire. I wasn't expecting a win, but that's ok too, I'll take it, lol. I will always share my Angel with those in need that I care about!
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Thanks for the kind words. Glad you liked this one.
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Thanks for the lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Loved It!!
Love your name
My nickname is also Sunshine
Suits You Beautifully like this Masterpiece You have penned!
Congratulations on our Win!!
This will bring forth a HUGE smile to Tim's face!
Thank You for sharing your Angel with him
and this verse with us!!
They both are priceless!!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Good Luck!
This was so sweet and precious.Straight from your heart.Thanks for sharing and the best of luck to you in the contest.
Kari -
G'night....oh...and I hope U don't mind me ca
Beautiful SSG.....You have compassion in your write...such a giving heart I can tell....This is the first one I have read of yours...but will get back to read more....This is my first contest to hold and I am trying my best to keep up with all the comments....Please forgive me if I stray away for a bit...
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Thanks Lilac. It was a mighty hard one to write. Glad that you enjoyed it.
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Sunshine you must have written this with sunshine flowing from your pen, it put a lump in my throat as I read each verse...so full of love from a warm heart...
~Lilac~
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Thanks Brenda, Glad you liked this one!
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Thanks Tessa, This had to be the hardest piece I have ever written. I wish I could have said more.
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This was so lovely honey...
I know this means the world to Tim...
Thanks for sharing
Much Love
Tessa -
excellent
She'll have a rose for you from me,
To plant in your heart,
To remind you each day,
That come what may,
since i love roses these were the lines I adore most this remind me of my garden. This is so very good. Thanks for you feedback the comments are very kind. hope you have a great day sending my love b -
Thanks Suzi, This was a hard one to write. I am glad you liked this one. z
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what a tender piece....ummm excuse me but what exactly are you talking about when you say they dont even come close...I think I am just going to send you to the chalk board and make you write a hundren times.....I will appreciate my own work....lmbo..
seriously hun, this was such a tender and heartfelt piece. thank you for sending me the link. I enjoyed it
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Thanks Rich, Glad you like it.
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Wings within to wind a verse as soul sings gratitude for our ongoing miracle...great write..
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Thanks Kido, Glad you liked this one. very hard to write!
Love ya,
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Great Job
Awesome write. I really liked this read. It doesn't seem like you are blocked to me. Great Job.
Luke -
Thanks Hana. This was a hard one to write. Took me three days to write it, as I wanted it to be perfect, and still not sure that it said everything I wanted to say to him. But again, thanks for the kind words and applause.
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This is sincere, tender and straight from the heart of a beautiful poetess...
You are great...you are filled with some much loyalty and sweetness...
your friend is truely moved by this.
All my love.
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Tim,
I am glad that you liked this. It was most difficult for me to write this one, for reasons that you know.
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beautiful!!!
Thankyou for your words of encouragement and love. much appreciated.
wml.............................Lionslove
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This is so vivid and graceful it brought tears of joy to my face you did an amazing job indeed, beautifully written as always. Just so touching makes me all warm and tingly inside, thanks for hsaring this it made my day
MxA
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Thanks Darling,
I hope it puts a smile on his face, and reminds him that someone loves him and cares about him.
Love,
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Thanks Chelli,
You know how long it took me to write this one. lol. I hope it puts a smile on his face, and reminds him that someone loves and cares about him.
Love ya,
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This is a beautiful tribute to her, and almost certainly very, very difficult to write. I hope he gets well soon- for your sake, his, and all those who love him so.
Wonderful job, All-Knowing Mommy.
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I know how difficult it was for you to write this poem, but I think you did an amazing job! It's a terrific tribute to Lionslove and it almost brought tears to my eyes!
Love you
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Thanks Earl for your kind words on this piece! I am glad that you enjoyed it. Your comments are always so wonderful and inspirational! Have a great day tomorrow.
Love ya my friend,
Nyetta
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HER WINGS ARE OPENED WIDE!
A beautifully written piece, indeed! It always makes me sad to hear of a beautiful soul who is sick and sufffering! You have done an excellent job of giviing Lionslove some hope, comfort, love, and peace with your heartfelt and soulful words! It is time for me to retire for the evening (I'll be up at 4 before The Rooster crows tomorrow) BUT I'll be sure to say a prayer this evening and for as long as it takes to send a healing ray of sunshine to Lionslove!
Peace & Love!
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Thanks Moe, Glad you liked the read.
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oh wow this is beautiful, well written and so endearing, wow this is wonderful, keep up the great work
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gaerielle,
Thanks for the most kind words on this one. I hope it cheers him up a bit, and if for just a moment, puts a smile on his face knowing that someone cares and loves him just a bit.
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Thanks for the kind words. As far as the contest, I don't care if I win anything, lol, yea it would be nice, but I wrote it to let him know that someone cares and loves him. But thanks for the well wishes.
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Angel For Rent :)
Humm this is exquisitely and beautifully written and composed. A theme i relate very naturally.. Angels are God's true love and guidance. They are messengers of personal love and intensity closest to intimacy with God.. In your poem, there is abundance of Higher Love to touch everyone on this planet!! This line:
With her she brings my love,
Wrap it around you,
In your time of need.
Let it be a safety net
In your time of fear
Oufff To avail yourself in the immense inexhaustible power of love within God's nearness is continually to be conscious that there is somebody in this world just for you, bringing a smile to you and healing your wounds with hugs and encouragement. Love this poem immensely. Much love xx -
Sweety, this is mighty beautiful. Oh man, I don't even have to let my stereo plays, this one plays with great volume. Oh beautiful this one is. I could be a birthday present. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing. You have a marvelous one and best of luck to you in this contest
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Thanks Jeannie,
Glad you enjoyed this one. I wish we could send angels to ones in need all the time.
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Thanks Shadow,
This was not an easy one to write, I too hope he gets better soon. I hope my angel will help him, as I am sure yours helped your wife when she needed it.
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Thanks, paullallady. I have spent three days working on this piece, and finally figured it out tonight. I like the idea of sending an angel to one in need. sounds so tender to me. Glad you liked the read.
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So very sweet, loving, and beautiful. Wonderful and support thoughts, very well written. It is evident these wishes and thoughts came from your heart. Good luck in the contest. Jeannie D Hunter
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This really brings a tear to my eyes as it reminds me of my wife and how I told her the night before she passed how in such a brief time she filled my whole life with love.
this is great and I wish your friend to get well soon..
Great write
Shadows -
Thanks for the kind words, glad you liked it so well.
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ohhhh, this is so sweet, it is so tender.
the idea of sending your angel to someone
else to help them through, what a novel idea.
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Good Luck
Very HIGH AWWWWwwwwwwww factor here SG...
Write ON..!
What the world needs now...is love sweet love...
Jackie DeShannon...
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