I half believed the things you told me,
How you just wish that you could hold me,
But now I see you're full of shit.
You didn't mean any of it.
I half wanted to fall once again,
Revise my theory on assholistic men,
But now I see you're full of shit,
You didn't mean any of it.
I didn't fall for your pathetic lines,
So it's okay folks, I'll be just fine,
Because now I see you're full of shit,
You didn't mean any of it.
You could have told me about her and you,
What the fuck did you think I would do?
Cry because you're so full of shit,
Hurt because you meant none of it?
Baby you could have simply told me,
That you really didn't want to hold me,
That all your words were full of shit,
That you didn't mean any of it.
No, I won't bother you ever again
There's always other asshole men,
Maybe one that isn't full of shit,
And really does mean all of it.
One who can make me fall for his lines,
Who knows my faults and likes me just fine,
And sees that though I'm full of shit,
I really do mean all of it.
Maybe I'll tell him about me and you,
And the very first thing we will do
Is laugh at you, so full of shit,
And we will mean all of it.
Author notes
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Written September 11th, 2006
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This is great. It's real. It's not "full of shit" vs. perfection, it's knowing who you are and daring to share it. Only under those conditions can love grow.
Tecohe
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Hey, sis. The repeat of 'full of shit' was great, but I think it took away a bit of the feeling (cuss words are only powerful (in my mind) if used seldomly). Also, the
"You didn't mean any of it."
Is slightly off meter, but can be fixed by adding one more syllable. However, I did like the raw emotion behind this, and loved the development of the ending. What I would really like is another one of your dark murder poems, but that's just me. I liked the dramatic break-up feel of this one. Good Write.
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Thanky hun!
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Wow... this is a totally kick-ass write. I could see some Blink-182 inspired girl-band singing lyrics like this... I would SO buy the album. Every girl knows where you're coming from on this one.
Excellent... the best that I've read in a while!
Kate
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