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Opus 8.

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Wordlessly, sat

contemplating

amidst the volumes of Vivaldi

in strong background

of delving cello's

and violins

rising and falling crescendo's

deep emotions stir the

senses

hollow chambers vibrate

with concerto panache

as one working in

unison

creating beauty of

mind and body

concentrated strides

reaching goals of fulfilment

climaxing frenzy of unadulterated

passions roll  with each

exquisite phrase

excitement mounting...

perfected pure sound filters

boldly towards the vortex

of understanding.






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Written September 11th, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    October 3, 2006
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  • cherche -d -ame
    October 2, 2006
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    It is a true masterpiece now (standing ovation)
    xoxo
    reenie

  • cutiepie gold member
    October 2, 2006
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    As always...you managed to see what I am blind to. I have re-read and yes, you have hit the spot. I have rectified and it reads much better, as I had hoped. Thank you my friend for your kindness, it is much appreciated p.s. sorry for the delay in replying but I have been away for two weeks. Thanks again


  • cutiepie gold member
    October 2, 2006
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    Many thanks Glad you enjoyed it

  • cutiepie gold member
    October 2, 2006
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    Lol...I see your humour twinkling from the fringes Glad you enjoyed the words my friend sorrry for the delay in replying but have been absent for the past two weeks. Thank you also for the applause as always it is very much appreciated

  • cutiepie gold member
    October 2, 2006
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    The title has obviously put some people off but I am not sure why? perhaps you could enlighten me.....? Glad you enjoyed the bigger picture though Many thanks

  • cherche -d -ame
    September 18, 2006
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    you paid homage to what music can do and how it can affect each and everyone of our senses (beautiful)If I may just make one suggestion....the word as seems to appear a bit too often (to me anyway)Maybe you could somehow eliminate it some , or substitute it with another one. Otherwise----great job

    reenie


  • lovelustre
    September 17, 2006
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    comtemplating life, lust and love to the sounds of wonderful music, now that is a luxury worth living for. and this poem is a luxury worth reading again, and again...


  • masterblaster gold member
    September 17, 2006
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    Hi, good poem good title, loved it my friend, good feel and very smooth, I wonder if you could find an honest comp to put it in,you have my applause, hugs Di


  • paullallady silver member
    September 17, 2006
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    good

    oh this is very beautiful. so sweet and descriptive.
    I agree though on the title, I skipped over it a few
    times expecting something totally different and am
    pleasantly surprised to find this beautiful writing.
    good job on this one.


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    Many thanks Beth, glad you enjoyed it


  • SexyAngel0418
    September 13, 2006
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    WOW... this is an awesome free write piece... I really like the shape it ended up making, it kinda just flowed with the poem!!! Great job!!!

    Beth

  • cutiepie gold member
    September 13, 2006
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    Lol, sorry well it is the title of a piece of music that I was listening to sorry if it upset you Glad you enjoyed thewords though

  • maheo
    September 13, 2006
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    Lovely!! I wish you would change the title because it took me a long time to click on something titled "Opus 8". This is such a well written piece that I would hate to see people scared away by the title.

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