As he reads a fiddles play
“shadows for beneath”
He still soars above my head
And in time fully drunk
“Incubate in vision of light
some tiny flood as seatongue cries”
Touching the strings
“L’esprit”
Tying me down on the chair
Losing his mind this time
“Walk on the clouds mass
Which others cannot pass”
Put down the violin, my dear
“Let me give you one more kiss”
let me write your very last play
the winds plays when you pass out
“Let the last play never reach its end
Just like my love for you is meant”
Author notes
OK . find out yourself what it mean
written out of a dream I had and for english class
seatongue is another word for wave, I made up myself
enjoy
Written September 11th, 2006
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The last two lines have left me speechless. This is a beautiful write, but there is such sadness in the lines. Really good write.
Thank you for your comment on my poem
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that is a very sweet poem! i loved it a lot. it shows that you have great talent whick by the way you do! well anyway sis good job and lets keep in touch.
your lovely sis
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Well..so to see it involves a great love...may it never end and the love making stay as good for ever
Well I just had to make something up for a meaning
It was a pleasure to read
XXJeannette
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