It’s unexpected—but
That’s how the story always goes.
Two individuals without
Any hopes or dreams that
Something special could happen to
Them, too. Yet now,
No look escapes without
Affection, no caress touching without
A wanton look. Amazing, isn’t it
What two individuals can do when
They put their hearts together.
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Written September 11th, 2006
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I like this one, it makes me think a bit and I think it's different and fresh, especially for a love poem. I agree with the thought, as well -- it *is* amazing indeed. Great write, I enjoyed it!
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good
it is amazing. money, looks, dreams, none of
that matters when love is involved. real true
honest love, not that for the moment of because
of looks or money kind of phoney stuff, but the
real thing. I love this, I love the wording, the
flow, all of it. good job.
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