Virtual healing
Mental pleading
Insides burning
Thoughts are screaming
Desire craves bleeding
Abusive dreaming
No more feeling;
Not worth breathing
Playful scheming
Devil's driving
Secrets leaking
Dark thoughts leading
The troubled and needing.
Author notes
Drunk + despair = very bad poetry
And no I'm not talking about the 2 lines that don't rhyme. That's deliberate.
Written September 11th, 2006
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Well, I don't think this is bad at all, although it is confusing. It seems to be very negative then lightens with "playful scheming". I'm not sure. I like the punchiness of the short lines, though.
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this is brilliant!i dunno what you mean!
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