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Musings of Merlin

Sage
Wizard
That is what folk call me
My name is a mystery
To many
Do not understand my ways
To bring
Enlightenment to these times
It is an age of darkness
That I mean to change
To bring forth the Great Ruler
A King
To end this foul shadow
In an ever bitter world
Ere I go to sleep
Till all dims once again

Author notes

My attempt at a persona poem for my creative writing class.
Written September 11th, 2006

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  • Meadow Fox
    September 12, 2006
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    it is so wonderful that you are able to write about fantasy in your class- ahhhhhh, fantasy. (I'm not sure if I'm going to be writing any poems about fantasy in my class- the prof wants them to be "sophisticated and modern." The version of Merlin presented here is also very nice


  • lemon meringue pie
    September 11, 2006
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    a i have to say i love the motif you have goin on and hope to speak to you at length. secondly i love the poem it really encepsulates the man and the image behind him.