I've always wanted to know,
What is it like to hear a friend's voice,
And to answer him.
I've always wanted to hear,
The songs of the birds in the park and sing back.
I've always wanted to answer a question I knew,
Not to sit down,
Trying to communicate with my hands and,
help me look up to myself,
even though i prefer to be dead.
Don't misunderstand me,
Am I not human too?
Realize that I can still see you,
kindling the fire,
not trying to keep me cold and waiting.
even though I prefer to be dead.
Seeing but not hearing,
Seeing but not speaking....
Author notes
Written September 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- No speaking, no hearing CLOSED by Cinnarry.
300 points, ended September 16, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Abstract poetry.... 500 points ... PW allowed. by Manoj Sanyal.
500 points, ended March 23, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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its...
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its old XP
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3 years old to be exact
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a poem with emotion..............
Thanks for your participation.
Good luck,
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That was...BEAUTIFUL! I loved it so much! This felt so true and you detailed it really really well. The emotion was so clear and powerful! I really really loved this! You kept me hooked, you touched my heart and this was a very inspirational piece. I'm glad I got the chance to read it. Fantastic work and keep it up!
~*Princess*~
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I like this, You did well on it. Keep up the good work. I enjoy reading your poetry.
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Are you speaking from a deaf persons point of veiw? if you are this is really cool i have never read one from that kinda point of veiw. awesome job and i hope to see more of your writing.
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Hey I really like that I am so not good with Acrostics. This one came out really well you did a good job.
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hewo my friend
this was so good! you have great choice of word and a flow that goes with it. really really great write
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um.......lol?thnx for commenting.I actually dont know what to say
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ah the songs of the birds, sorrow indeed for someone never to hear their beauty. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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thnx
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Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest!
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