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Catching A Dream

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Catching A Dream

To dare to dream, to dare to hope,
though may be found beyond the scope.
It starts a thought then a vision,
Mulling over your decision.

To dare not dream, or beyond see,
the realm of possibility.
Sometimes it takes, a lifetime long,
for hearts to sing, loves sweet song.

We gather thoughts, memories,
of winter wind, a summer breeze.
A heart to touch, a hand to hold,
life's miracles as they unfold.

Through time and space as stars fall,
we see the power of love enthral.
To fan the flames, to have desire,
you must keep faith to brave the fire.

Do not let go, wish on that star,
it falls for you, to where you are.
Keep standing tall and persevere,
reach for them, your dreams are here.



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Written September 11th, 2006

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  • Airborne Ed silver member
    September 17, 2006
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    Congradulations on the gold trophy. This poem is so very beautiful piece of poetry. It is just so beautiful. I dare not comment on one or two lines as they all work so perfectly together to form a poetic masterpiece. You really did an amazing job writting this poem. Thank you so much for sharing it with me....

  • Veronica Leigh
    September 11, 2006
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    This is excellent. Beautiful beautiful job. Exactly what I was looking for. You words flowed effortlessly and the meaning behind your words show wonderful hope. Awesome. Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck!

  • Jeri silver member
    September 11, 2006
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    This is a beautiful poem especially for today. You are so hopeful. Beautifully written my friend.
    God's touch
    Jeri

  • paullallady silver member
    September 11, 2006
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    good

    Do not let go, wish on that star,
    it falls for you, to where you are.
    Keep standing tall and persevere,
    reach for them, your dreams are here.

    yes, exactly, this is good. the wording the imagery,
    good job with this one.

  • September 11, 2006
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    great

    Great poem.I think the ending was excellent.

  • vanteya37
    September 11, 2006
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    nice

    makes me feel hopeful, this does. nice.
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