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Midnight Masquerade

Two hearts beating true;
Two bodies in ecstasy;
Two souls become one.

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My first Haiku.
Written September 10th, 2006

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  • Amun-Ra
    October 24, 2006
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    Congrat on your Haiku (I have no idea what that is). This was short and promising. "Two souls become one"
    Edited on Oct 24, 2:19 p.m. because ''.

  • Miss Yorik
    September 11, 2006
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    congrats on your first haiku! I like the the idea of two, yet "in three", i.e. two people, but hearts, bodies, and souls - makes three. And yet all are one. THanks for entering.

    Melanie