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General Order one

General order Number one
No sex, no booze, No fun
So what else is there to do
On this Iraqi beat


We can't gamble
Have a pet or cohabitate
That's right it changed
We can have sex these days

It sure made a statement here
But nothings really changed
Because those who would still do
And those who don't still won't

I just hope I find the ones That will
So I don't feel so blue
And maybe soon will get a drink
when all hell breaks loose

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General order Number One stops us from having porn, booze, drugs, Pets, weopons(Certain Contractors) And several other things that do make sense.  But Sex is now allowed.
Written September 10th, 2006

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  • gullionmar
    September 10, 2006
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    well written yea sex may be allowed now but just be careful of who u have it with wouldnt want you to get anything

  • June-bug
    September 10, 2006
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    Interesting write, best of luck in you seach.

  • lifesymbiotic
    September 10, 2006
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    I know this may not be much consolation,but I'll have a drink tonight and raise a glass on your behalf,especially after such an open honest write,...big love lifesymbiotic