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Prove










Just to say the very least,
I’ve tried my ultimate best,
To show and give you all I could,
Prove you’re better than the rest.


Even when you’d make me mad,
I’d always seem to forgive.
What got me happy later on,
Was the life together we’d live.

 

On those stressful weakening days,
I’d bring my self to make sure,
To call you up, to hear your voice,
For me that was my cure.


And if you’ve never noticed before,
What I was capable of,
Just know that one thing was for sure,
At the time you were my true love.


I would of spoiled you to the extreme,
Prove you’re the only one for me.
But you’ve took away my only chance,
Now I’m hoping that you’re happy,


I’m not saying things because you’re gone,
You just never gave me the chance,
To up my game and prove to you,
That I was in love with you first glance.


You’ve wanted more than I could give,
In our so called “Relationship”.
The reason for you’ve lost interest in me,
Brought me everyday to trip.


I’m sorry for ever believing in us,
I’m sorry for wasting my time.
I’m sorry you’ve lost interest in me,
I’m sorry I ever called you mine.


But just to set the record straight,
All I’ve said and done was true.
The only thing I regret everyday
Was letting my self love you!







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Regret ... Forget ... Accept!
Written September 10th, 2006

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  • Young carrot poetry
    September 8, 2007
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    Really good writen, I surely like it.


  • Beautiful Angel
    January 29, 2007

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    Awesome write!
    I really enjoyed it!
    I felt thee emotion you put in it!
    I can even relate quiet a bit to it.
    I really, really loved it!


  • angel-lover
    October 24, 2006
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    excellent write.


  • blueyez
    September 15, 2006
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    awwwwwwwww I'm sorry vics!!!!!! You are wonderful! Much props.


  • Child of Water
    September 15, 2006
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    i like this alot. A strong flow of emotion...and I can relate. Best wishes and nice work


  • WishMeAway--x
    September 15, 2006
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    That is a definate ouch...but great in every other way! I had a situation like that. the -so called relationship- were actually cool now! I'm happy to read that you have accepted that most possible thing in the world. great write, hope to read some more of yours later
    Always~Moony


  • September 13, 2006
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    I know your not talking about me..

  • Rudolf
    September 12, 2006
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    I feel your wounds

    I really like your site,most interesting i've run across times ten,I like your poem too,exspecialy the last two stanzas.I feel your wounds,nothing in life prepares us for rejection.You said to be straight with you.so i will.I'd shorten it up a bit
    That will add power to the ending.Check out some of my stuff and let me know what you really think,We share some history.Rudolf


  • Nadelle
    September 11, 2006
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    How sad...(sniff) I know exactly how you feel in this one. I've been there way too often myself. You wrote this so beautifully that I can't help but feel exactly what you feel. The lines are wonderfully written with an easy to read flow. Good grammer and spelling makes it even better. I also love your name by the way. I used to get called that all the time.

    I suggest you kick that guy from your thoughts. He's not worth it if he can't give you everything you need.


  • -darkprincess-
    September 11, 2006
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    excellent!!!

    wow!!! painfull and beautiful write... really touched me... made me thinking... im sure that even though, you don't hate him, otherwise, you still love him, and that is why you regret yourself... actually is a very very nice poem!!! love the way you wrote it, and the way you express feelings, such as love, sadness, etc... you are a really artist in what concerns to me, hope you get what you really deserves and that you will be happy!!! well, see my work if you have some time, and remember, you are very a lot good at this!!! you got my aplausses, always!!!
    good luck and keep writing like this!!!
    love always!!!
    kisses!!
    (* pau

    ^^

    ... te amo

    ^^


  • Rele anmwe
    September 11, 2006
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    This is pretty nice. It is better to be your own company keep. For yourself you can always assure of. Life is strange in time of loss, but we must accept the concept of life for it is indeed true. We never lose someone at all, so feel no regret my dear, that person just lost you. I honestly believe, when someone doesn't not appreciate what he/she has and look else where, they will soon come crawling back, for the beauty of life shines in the heart of a faithful home. This is a very beautiful piece. Keep up the great work and thank you for sharing. By the way, yesterday as I stayed home listening to a preacher's preach, he talked about a friend that he has and who also works in a circus of how he can walk on a rope and never falls down, he asked him how do you walk on that rope and never fall, the man replied, all you have to do is keeping your eyes fixed to where you want to go and you will get there. So my reason for bringing you that little story is to just say, if you don't look down, you will not fall. And, why in the hell are you sad for, you are victoria secret, you are a goddess, princess of beauty. Bump him, better things come to those who deserve it

  • Passions Storm
    September 11, 2006
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    Aww.. I'm sorry Victoria.. If he couldn't see you for how awesome you are.. then he doesn't deserve you.. You certainly deserve much better.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 10, 2006
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    Love reading you~


  • Ice phantom
    September 10, 2006
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    keep it up

    good job on writing it it was very good keep it up


  • paullallady silver member
    September 10, 2006
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    good

    this is very good. it flowed so well, and it touched the
    reader. it is sad when love does not work out. it is
    such a loss. but this is a very good write. good job.


  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    September 10, 2006
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    Long but veri worth it! I loved the style, the structure . . . form . . . so graceful! Brilliant write!

    Keep penning . . . keep sharing . . . and much luck to you in any and all future poetic ventures!

    Continue towards your poetic destiny locked in the light of the angels of language.

    Maggie


  • lovelifelive gold member
    September 10, 2006
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    to good for words

    pain at its best come out better on paper then in court .the raw pain of losing a loser never felt so good until you experienceture love...good read

  • thestreets son
    September 10, 2006
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    the only thing i regret everyday Is and also in the third stanza at the end you don't need the comma.


  • candyinchelsea
    September 10, 2006
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    OH MY AP FRIEND,
    I FEEL FOR YOU.
    AND I SEND YOU A HUG.


  • requiempoet gold member
    September 10, 2006
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    I wouldn't ever give you up. You're gorgeous!!! ! all the best for my Toria!!!

  • Miss Yorik
    September 10, 2006
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    Sad to read, and sad to see something like that can be so true. I can relate so well to this part, though:

    On those stressful weakening days,
    I’d bring my self to make sure,
    To call you up, to hear your voice,
    For me that was my cure.

    I'll be going through one of those moody days and calling up my boyfriend cheers me right up. He makes life seem worthwhile. But I hope you find happiness and love.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Melanie


  • Gwenevere
    September 10, 2006
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    Painful write.He's the loser.Why is he alone????? Because he never saw what was right there in front of him.Don't be sorry for loving him just think thank goodnes you did because now you can love someone who really desrves it, Ros

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