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life consumed /life consumed revised /life consumed 2

A life consumed
in hatred and the Fear to
DIE
screaming silence become you
a life consumed
in ranting and raving
Fronting And Faking
a life consumed
in a wrold
that shows no mercy
where everyone is a victem
in a world where the issue's
are no longer impmortant
but self preservation
is at the top
a life consumed
self consumed
self contained
violence grips humanity by the balls
instead of educating they give in
life or death?
only in death can life be fulfilled
and in life no one is significant
a life consumed by...




Heartless ,brainless clones
just what they wanted you to be
but, you did it to yourslef
engulfed your life with
blood , blackness, defeat
pulse from mandkind is slowly fading
War has broken out
We are the future of america
Be verry afraid
shadows watching you
breathing ice on your neck
live in in a constant state of fear
silent footsteps
impossible to hear
searching inside for an ounce of
strength
darkness consumes your life
seems as if the sun went away
a life consumed by uneducated  
pricks running your life....


UNFINISHED


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Written September 10th, 2006

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