You're where my mind wanders
When I'm falling asleep.
You're the wonderful place
In all of my dreams.
You're the reason I get
Out of bed in the morning.
You're the reason I'm still here.
You're in every beautiful flower
I pass by in a day.
You're in every love song
That comes on the radio.
You're in every magnificent sunset
That graces the sky with it's presence.
You're the reason I'm here.
You're the gentle breeze
That runs his hand down my cheek.
You're the sweet rain
That kisses my skin.
You're the glorious moon
That is the envy of the night sky.
You're the reason I want to be here.
You keep me sane
When life gets crazy.
You make me laugh
When I can't smile.
You're where my heart runs
When everything is wrong.
You're the only thing that's always right.
You're the only thing that's ever right.
For you, My Love, I will always be here.
Author notes
i think it's pretty self explainitory.
Written September 10th, 2006
A contest entry
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Wow ain't lovw grand? Being in love is abosolutly amazing from my stand point. My husband would agree. Thank you for sharing and it was very much a pleasure to read
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This is really good
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wow, what powerful words
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This poem carries a very sweet, tender and beautiful message to the one you have written this for
You've poured out your feelings in an elegant way!
thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
aww, thats beautiful, goddamn im in such a lovey moood now, i should call my boyfriend....
good luck in my contest anyways!
Suna Ketsuma -
wow...wonderful...amazing poem, amazing, and I completely relate to it...
jeeeze, this is exactly how I feel about my love.
"You're the gentle breeze
That runs his hand down my cheek.
You're the sweet rain
That kisses my skin"
probably maybe my favorite lines.
Great job!!
--molly -
I totally get the "you are" instead of "you're" thing, and honestly, usually i wouldn't have contracted it, but honestly, it's the way i read it in my head... "you are" just didn't fit in the rhythm like "you're" does. but yeah, no offense taken, and i totally get what you're saying, thanks for the comment.
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This is a great write, I really like it. Just one suggestion, and its really a personel preference. Try, not not using contractions like no, it's or you're, use it is or you are... Unless it's a quote, like someone talking... Which this could be read that way... Just giving a suggestion, not meaning any offense. Any way you take it, I really like this poem. Thank you so much for sharing your words and thoughts with all of us here. -
You're the gentle breeze
That runs his hand down my cheek.
You're the sweet rain
That kisses my skin.
You're the glorious moon
That is the envy of the night sky.
You're the reason I want to be here...wow, that was beautiful..thanks for the read...tricia
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