I wish to be everything,
yes everything,
your everything....
To be the oxygen
that fuels the flames of desire
deep within your soul.
To be the victim
falling into submission
from your domineering eyes.
To be inebriated
by the alcoholic temptation
fused within your kiss.
To be the dance floor
in which the tango
of your fingers shall perform.
To be the buffet
of infinite nourishment
from which you endlessly feast.
To be the canvas
in which your tongue creates
a masterpiece of love upon.
To be the volcanic chamber
to which your molten lava
shall forever be welcomed to flow.
To be the thread
that mends ragged tears
in the blanket of love that is your heart.
To be
the passion,
the desire,
the lust,
the love...
To be
the dream
turned reality.
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For Blazing White Wolf
Written September 10th, 2006
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This poem is beautiful and full of emotion. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!
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Very passioante indeed, loved reading it. Good luck in the contest!
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hehehe, boobs! just kidding.
hmm, for the most part i really like this, i particularly like the dance floor and buffet stanzas, they are cute and made me smile!
overall, i like it, but there are some parts that are just kind of… “ew-ish.” parts that borderline cheesiness are the parts such as, the canvas, victim, and oxygen stanzas.
i really like the creativity that has been put into this, it shows that you actually thought about what you wrote rather than just spewing bullshit, thank you. (:
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I love that you want to be his everything, you want to be absoulutly everything you can to him, I like that. Great Poem. Thanks for enetering
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Awww what a precious and sweet write. I remember this one and you did good with putting it in the contest.
The best of luck to you!
Kari -
Sensational! Full of the desire and throbbing yearning that beats within his wolf heart. Just wonderful Sweet poet. Wonderful write!
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Cool! Very well written. The black and white with the black and white picture was very effictive. Great job!
Good luck!
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Awesome!
This was very wonderful
I enjoyed it and the form.All of u are so good at writing these forms! lol 
Kari -
This is such a wonderful poem. It is nice to see a love poem which is written in the typical emo way! I also really like the way you write about a sub/Dom lifestyle without it being vulgar or too detailed. The poem has some lovely imagery in it, and flows really well. I loved reading this piece.
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oh sweeti this iis soooooo beautiful more so than I deserve wow thank you hun love you
Love,
Master -
Wow.
This is so deep.
So much emotion..
It blew me away.
I love you use of words also.
Great write
Good luck in the contest
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Auntie this was hot as well as a damn good write. I think your poetry is kick ass! Great job I LOVED IT!!!! Keep up the wonderful work!
Summer -
Bekl,
DAMN!!!! Go ahead girl.. I know MAster will love this. It is so full of passion and love. It is worded with perfection and sprinkled with ecstacy! Well done. I love this. I see you too have stepped up for the challenge this week. This is one of my favorites by you in this challenge.
Love ya,
Mel
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Breath-taking
Absolutly breath taking. Such a piece of art! Wow...I have no chance against this in the contest.
Oh well. I'm glad I read this...it's absolutly amazing!
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excellent~
Beautiful breathtaking and so romantic as well
I love it sis
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Nice write, I have to say the repitition didn't do it for me.. but it did for others.. good luck in this challenge. I am so relieved about this one lol!
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Simply breathtaking, Mom.
Oh how I wish all of our dreams could become reality; sure there may be some conflicts of interests 
but even for a moment, it would be so sweet to taste the nectar of a dream become reality. And your words, you've worded this just so incredibly; each of the stanzas is intriguing... and pulls at the heart. Such a heartfelt and genuine write - absolutely gorgeous. 
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A well thought out and creatively put togther piece.
Well done
Jill/Cherry xxxx -
Absolutely beautiful. Very well written. Wonderful tribute. I am sure Blaze will love this. Thank you for sharing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Jeannie D Hunter
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Beautifully written with great imagy and emotion. Loved the feel and flow of this great write. keep your pen forever flowing! Bunny
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Oh Bel, this is wonderfully beautiful! I have to agree that this is one of your very best!
I'm sure Blaze will love this!
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Sis this is such an amazing write of both beauty and love. You have written what I would feel is one of your best. I loved it.
lil bro
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