This Starry Night, It's so clear and right!
The Stars as white as Snow!
Gleaming above all, with the Moon and the Sun!
Oh Look! The constellations in different shapes!
This ain't a leafy sky, Its a sky filled with STARS!
Author notes
We can make out so many things out of STARS and that is why they are my favourite! 
Be HAPPY and enjoy seeing the STARS! 
Written September 10th, 2006
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wowwwwwwwwwww this is wonderful.. i love to sit n look at the stars n make pictures wif them ..it such a peaceful way to spend time n relax ...smiles aunty cheeky
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You know with all those ! Marks I thoguht you were being sarcastic, it gave that feel to it But I know how you mean, stars are beautiful and although i'm visually impaired, I can see most stars and I pity those who can't see at all as they miss out on some beautiful patterns. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Pretty! =]
Well, I can't believe it you've written this Wonderful piece!
Hmmm.. but it is true ofcourse! 
I love the STARS and you too! Loveeeeeeee you alot!
Nida -
love this one it makes me feel like a kid again but thats how i feel everytime i look at the stars... like a kid... enjoying God's creations like its the first time i have seen them
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hey shamz babe! another fantastic poem i am not surprised to say lol great job luv ya xxxxxxxxx big sis xxxxxxxxx
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your poem is really good....
i love the stars in it and what you
said about them....
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Brilliant!!!
Umm, nice imagery...great write, as I said earlier, u hav awesome potential, so, keep the pen flowing...love, shuvi -
i got a Bronze!
Thanks for ur beautiful comment!
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you have a good point, i love looking at the sky and picking out different shapes and animals and things like that. nice job expressing your thoughts here. <3 Jorrdan
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Congrats
Congrats on the silver! This is a beautiful write and you did a great job composing with the title you were given.
You have a very talented pen! Keep writing.
Blessings! Tammy -
sweet
i loved this one a lot...but i dont think u need to caps to emphasize..it will be just as powerful as it is and beautiful as well..i am surprised with this poem of yours..its exceptionally good..very good lil sis..
keep it up..
thanks for entering and good luck to u..
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I liked this poem, 'its so clear' should be 'it's so clear'. Good use of sibilance (repetition of 's' sound) with 'StarS aS white aS Snow' (capitalised to show S not just for sticky caps ) I also liked the 'stars as white as snow' because it was a good simile. I liked how you showed nature here. This was a great, descriptive poem. I felt that it was very hopeful. Keep writing, I liked the theme of the stars here. You're very good at English, when I was your age I was quite bad at French and German (ok, not that bad at German but not as good as your English) and I still can't talk Indian
Thanks for your comment
All the best
Pozo
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I love stars too little sis, sounds like a beautiful night! I always love staring up at the sky, good job on this poem!
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beautiful
So nice to sit back and realize how beautiful the stars are! They're out each and every night, yet I take them for granted most times. Thanks for helping be appreciate them!
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What a beautiful insightful write about a wonderful night. How sweet and uplifting this is. You did very well, your flow is good and it reads well.
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