Yes, maybe I understand why,
Someone with lots of mates like you,
might not want to be seen going out with a loner like me.
Yes, I suppose it makes sense,
That you might not want someone as uncool as me,
hanging around with someone like you,
Shaming your scene and ruining your perfect rep
Yes, it should figure,
that you may not want to sit,
staring into the eyes of that blank visage of mine,
in the same way that I stare into your delicate face,
whenever I happen to see you
Yes,I suppose after a while,
it becomes pretty obvious,
that whenever that dissonant sound omits from my throat,
you don't melt and find yourself at a loss for words,
in the same way that I do,
when I hear that sound akin to a choir of angels.
And so anyone can see,
that I probably will never have a chance with you,
for I am unworthy.
But in spite of this, my joys are many,
for I know what it is to love,
and to behold,in all her glory,
such a queen of all goddesses,
as you.
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Written September 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- A letter to an angel by alicia55.
300 points, ended September 15, 2006, 15 entries
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SWEET INDEED
What feelings you have expressed here, and in spite of her hostile atitude, you still find her attractive. be careful, do not let your heart be hurt. Always another one that might fancy you and you her, and love will bloom. All the best, my friend.
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a girl like that doesnt deseve you
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A girl like that REALLY doesn't deserve you Spanner. It's Aiden by the way... I might try and add some Poetry if I can think of any.
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yeah that's the bloody point
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hmm I like this it is very well writtena dn flows perfectly well done
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This is really good spanner!!! It's so sweet and meaningfull. I really like it. But just for the record... You are NOT a loner. You a v cool.
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