A little girl falls,
And loses her way,
All because a man decided her fate.
Her fate was to be hurt,
And to be burned by trust.
She learned her lessons,
As she knew she must,
From man she can't even hate.
She grows into a woman,
Intelligent and beautiful,
But shy and alone,
As a girl who refuses to date.
As she grew,
She learned to fight,
Never trust,
And never elaborate.
She slowly trusts a man.
A good man,
Honest and true,
A man who challenged fate,
To give her,
Her first date.
Author notes
This just came to me, I hope you like it, this poem may not be that great, but I like it and I hope you do too =]
Written September 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything poems by Tyler N Stephy BFFL.
300 points, ended September 10, 2006, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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TRUST CAN BE A DANGEROUSE THING FOR THE YOUNG FOR SOME PEOPLE HAVE GREAT EVEIL LURKING IN THEIR SOUL WITH THE BEST DISQUISES .
iF YOU FOUND THE PERSON WHO TRULY LOVES YOU HE WILL AND CAN TALK TO YOU ABOUT ANYTHING AND CAN LOOK YOU IN THE EYES WHILE DOING IT . bEWARE OF THOSE WHO LOOK AWAY
SAY I HAVE A NEW BOOK COMEING OUT REAL SOON I WILL IM YOU WHEN IT IS READY -
absolutely fantastic
I wish you success in this contest. The tale you tell may not be personal but drives home the point of the overwhelming love felt when a girl becomes a woman. Mr. Joe
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