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Cinderella Walking Out on Prince Charming

I thought I saw something in you
I thought it was true
and i do believe at one point in time
it was
but our love has died now
we no longer exist
why this has happened i am not sure of
but usually you hear of
a Prince Charming coming to rescue Cinderella
but guess what
things are a little different now
Cinderella is walking out on Prince Charming
because i am tired of sitting
and waiting
and wanting
you to be a man
and stand up
and hold me and treat me like a woman should be
i am so sick and freak-in' tired of it all
of hurting of crying myself to sleep every night
i don't want this
i want you the real you
not the one you have become
you hurt me really bad
so now it is time for me to give back to you a little of what you have given to me
goodbye Prince Charming

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Written September 9th, 2006

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  • Getopoet
    November 26, 2006
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    hooray for cinderella leave prince charming in the dust


  • KK Slider
    September 9, 2006
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    I really like this poem. Your a brave soul.