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world peace

Drugs in my school are all shouted about
Drugs in my school are all known about
I scream and i shout world peace and honesty
Only to be shot down with bullets and gangs about
Cripz and Bloodz get down and dirty
GD and VL's violate my dreams
One day i hope to influence the world
that WORLD PEACE is what is should be all about> ONE DAY

Author notes

I know this is not a great peom but its still good!
Written September 9th, 2006

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  • cristion girl co 08
    September 10, 2006
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    i know waht ya mean

  • femurlee
    September 9, 2006
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    Great

    I think your emotions and notions are great. They sing sweet positive music to my ears. More people should feel fired up to make good changes in this world. God knows we need it! Peace.