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She lights my life

The morning comes and I cringe at the light pouring in the window.
But then I roll over and the hate for the light fades into adoration.
For with it filling the room I can see your face, preciously sleeping.
Breathing rhythmically next to me you are a wonder to my eyes.

I still ask myself everyday how I ended up with you.
Fate it seems has brought us into each others lives.
To love one another for the rest of time.
For you I wake in the morning and live through the day.

I forget all my past "loves" for I have found it true.
I have never felt this strongly before, I hope you know it is for you.
My eyes have never shown as brightly as when you are looking into them.
My heart has not felt this light since I had the innocence of childhood.

Time spent with you is time I would die to keep.
Holding you close to me, caressing your skin.
Feeling your heart beat in time with mine.
Knowing this is where I belong till my time has expired.

Kissing you gently I pull away as not to disturb you.
I watch you sleep so peacefully.
Again I wonder what I did to earn this.
And I thank whatever god there is that I have you.

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Written September 9th, 2006

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  • Browneyes666
    January 16, 2007

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    awwww

    ya kno stevie its really nice to see that you can write something as happy as this. its also great to kno that your life is going in a better direction, even tho we have grown apart..it seems that fate meant for it so our lives could get better. i wish i didnt have to give you up as a friend for so long but hey we are friends again and thats all that matters right?

  • lediamond
    October 17, 2006
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    well done

    Whoever this is for I am sure would be touched if they saw it, and if it was due to a frame of mind and a story in your heart, it is a beautiful one. The imagery is wonderful and the words are heart warming.


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    September 10, 2006
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    Beautifully written and well thought out. I can see the image with in my mind. This person is a very lucky person indeed. god speed to you both