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Pain and Guilt

Walking alone
Feeling nothing
But
Pain and guilt
Looking to find
Someone
Or
Something
To hang on to,
I’m
Losing my grip,
And
Life was dragging me
To it’s endless loop,
Of Pain
And Misery
Loosing myself
To the darkness
That feeds upon
My pain and guilt
Feeling as if
My
Soul may never return.

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Written September 9th, 2006

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  • Missing a petal
    October 17, 2006
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    ok my moods just dampened a little. Very powerful stements there, I like how some of the lines make sense on their own, but with the next line it extends the meaning such as "looking for someone...or...something".

    Am feeling like this at the moment (very bad couple of weeks), so it's good to read poetry that lets me know I'm not the only one

    Love to all,

    G xx


  • kittykat327
    September 9, 2006
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    Hey I fixed it Thanks hon


  • amandalynn0485
    September 9, 2006
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    hay i found something wrong with it... you spelt guilt wrong in the title.. but other then that it is a really good piece and i know that feel all to well my self. keep writting and ill keep reading


  • kittykat327
    September 9, 2006
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    If it needs something please let me know this just came to mind and I wrote it down.