Where oh where is my Teddy Bear
Why oh why is he gone from me
Was it because I was unfair
Where oh where is my Teddy Bear
Or did he dissolve in thin air
Leaving me in misery
Where oh where is my Teddy Bear
Why oh why is he gone from me.
Author notes
Written September 9th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Teddy Bear Or Bare Day by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended September 12, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything Goes....Or Does It? by lowercase prelude.
1500 points, ended July 8, 2008, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sweet and childlike. very nice
It has a nice flow to it -
where 'o where can he be....I think he is hiding from everyone you see...guess he wanted this day to be secluded from all he sees(lol). Very well penned write! I want to thank you by entering my contest *Teddy Bear Or Bare Day" with an applause for taking the time to write for it.
Ted E -
This is so wonderful, I have written a few triolets myself and I do consider yours to be sad, and fabulous. Thanks for sharing this!
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