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Happy B-day

May the moon

always shine down on you

May the truth

never be in disguise

May the winds of blessings

find your home

May the stars

always shine in your eyes

 

A special person,

born to fly

With velvet,

lining your wings

I wish you

the best birthday ever

And all the tomorrows

that this life can bring

 

 

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Written September 9th, 2006

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  • CedricDempNQ2
    October 7, 2008
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    Cute poem

    Cute poem Dove. Celebrates the occasion of the birthday.


  • FifthDove
    September 20, 2006
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    You're very welcome birthday girl

  • phoenixonfire
    September 11, 2006
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    THANKS

    Ok i am not gonna say anything about sending it to hallmark cos everyones said that but firstly I am thanking u from the core of my heart for the lovely message for me..it actually made me go wow! So nice and gentle..full of wishes my frnd..Thanks so much..
    Thanks again..
    PREETI


  • capricornpoet
    September 11, 2006
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    A September's day you were born

    Phoenix on fire, always rising never conquered.
    May that symbol be your light of day and fire of night.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    September 10, 2006
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    Really wonderful birthday wish,for sure phoenixonfire will going to love it ....Hallmark will be thrilled to have you as an employee

    XXJeannette

  • Warrior7
    September 9, 2006
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    awwww how beautiful Dove, Queen is right you should send this to Hallmark. Excellent


  • queen Moderators member
    September 9, 2006
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    You really need to send this to Hallmark or someone Excellent poem. I know she will love it. I do

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