Sea green and sapphire blue
Turquoise, clear, crystal and true
I want them on me.
Author notes
Written September 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Super quick ~ Ends at any moment ~ Enter now! by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended September 9, 2006, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Nicely done! A wonderful strong write in so few words.
Congratulations to you on the Silver! -
Usually haiku leave me about as excited as an Aborigine on Australia Day but I thought this one was quite good really!
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Holy shit, I hadn't realised it was a haiku... mmm, perhaps I should pay more attention... Thanks for the read
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Very thought provoking and intensely captivating. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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