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Why do i love you?

Sitting here trying to come up with the words to explain how i feel but all that comes up is two words...
"True Love"
People are always asking me...
Why do you love him so much but all i can say is i just do.
True love can't be explained.
It's a feeling...
Just like sadness, loneliness, anger.
the only way i know for sure that i love him is because every time i see him i get butterflies, when he kisses me my knees get weak, I'm nervous when i'm getting ready to see him, and when he holds me the entire world and all my problems fade.
He promises me a life i've always wanted...
And for the first time... i'm not afraid to except his offer.
he loves me with all his heart...and the feeling is mutual.
I love him so much that i could just shout it from the mountain tops and not care who hears it.
Our life together began two months ago...
And it will go on as long as we both shall live.



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Written September 9th, 2006

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  • Elandili.Alatariel
    September 9, 2006
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    I like the first 7 or 8 lines, they really express that feeling. I guess there are some things that just can't be explained easily. And it's such an intense, uncontrollable thing as well... Your writing seems like it's very personal, from the heart and doesn't take a lot of effort in creating or anything like that. It's sounds like it's just what you feel. Thanks for the great poem. I'll go check out some of your other works sometime soon.