Barbie by TallDrinkofWater at All poetry

I do like long legs
Pretty smile, a nice pair
Well you know of what

A nice set of eyes
Call me in, I can not lie

But once I get pass
All those physical thing
What I really want is a Heart

Because without a heart
Your just a barbie doll
And I don't get off
on plastic things

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What makes a good women, One part looks, One part sexuality, One part compatability, Ten parts heart
Written September 8th, 2006

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Cynthia Gaines
November 7, 2006
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A Plastic Joke!
Oh, shut up! If Barbie heard you, she'd be really pissed!!
Frodofan
September 17, 2006
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A couple of titles, but a funny and sweet concept. Love it... death be to Barbies!
Kari
September 15, 2006
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Awesome!
This was so feeled with truth here. I hope more people read it! You've done a great job. Thanks for sharing this write

Kari
daviscth
September 15, 2006
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The last lines sold me on this. It was a great write.
Diamondeyes
September 12, 2006
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I love the last two lines! This is cute, i like it.
Sandygram
September 12, 2006
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VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH this was wonderful. You are going to make some woman mighty mighty happy some day. . Alot of guys could learn a thing or two from you. Wonderful poem my friend. It gave me a smile.Take care, Sandy
SummerKissed
September 11, 2006
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Every girl wants to be Barbie and if she comes with a brain that all the better! But look out...she can be dangerous. I like your poem. It was fun to read. Summerkissed
shuvi
September 10, 2006
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Excellent!
I hate fake ppl tooo......wonderful write.....i luved ur poem....very honest....says a lot in afew words.....great job!!! Keep the pen flowing!!!
sadsongstress
September 10, 2006
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This is very honest and true. Most girls seem to think that if they have the looks they'll get the guys and all too often they're right. its nice to know there;s someone out there who appreciates aheart as well.Great write.
Until later,
Songstress
gullionmar
September 9, 2006
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how very true charlie ,alot of men go after goodlooking woman for their bodies but what good are looks without a heart of tenderness and love wonderful write take care my friend ok
AALouisiana
September 9, 2006
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thought provoking...well written...*roll*
This poem of yours reminds me of something my mother used to tell my sister and me..."Pretty is as pretty does" in other words, It's what's on the inside that's truly important." I'm glad to hear a man talk about hating the "barbie doll" type of woman. I think most men if they're really being truthful like a woman to be real with them, not fake. Your little ditty provoked a lot of emotion in me. Take care and God bless, swp
gypsy princess
September 9, 2006
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i love this poem it sure dose make ladys feel better
about there self knowing that not all men out there are after
barbie type good looks but rather a heart of gold and great company well done this is stunning z

Toni
Angelwatchingme
September 9, 2006
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Wonderfully written. Women (real ones) often feel compared to her as well as Porn stars, but when you are with a beautiful woman and she doesn't have 1: Intelligence, 2: Class 3: True Sensuality (not the kind you see in porn mags) , and 4: a heart of gold, how many guys do you think, honestly will want to remain with her? Most men want a companion in a woman, not a charm on their arm, so as a real lady, I tell you, I am not a Barbie, but a Lady.
dont-4-get- duckie
September 9, 2006
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This poem has heart (Ken doesn't, nor does barbie) anywho,i loved this, you have penned this wonderfully.
June-bug
September 8, 2006
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excellent
Wonderfully stated Charlie, yah Ken isn't every woman's dream either. Without heart it is hollow and shallow.
blueyez
September 8, 2006
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I don't like plastic either