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Who is the Guy?

Who is the guy?
That you want to hold,
Every night of every week?

Who is the guy?
That you spend so much time,
Thinking about on lonely days?

Who is the guy?
That steals your thoughts,
When you need them most?

Who is the guy?
That you just want to
Pour every emotion on?

Who is the guy?
That you might
Not tell, recoil, give up on?

Who is the guy?
That you just want to
Hold and steal forever?

Who is that guy?

Is it me?

Author notes

I got this poem from a myspace comemnt I left my [soon to be] girlfriend. Although she never told me, I still want to know. Even if it isn't me, [which would be devastating].
Written September 8th, 2006

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  • -darkprincess-
    September 11, 2006
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    excellent!!!

    wow!!! made me cry... im cleaning my tears from my eyes... this is so passionate... i hope the boy i love thought bout me this way... you are such an artist, you have lot of talent, cause make me cry, is really too much for me... wow!!! you are so great i cannot believe it yet... well... hope you see my work if u have some time... and i might ask you if u wanna be part of my AP family, well, of course, that's up to you...
    keep like this!!!
    up to good!!!
    kisses!!!
    (* pau

    ^^

    ... te amO

    ^^

  • ldsrockhard
    September 8, 2006
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    well its cute!!! i think its cool! every girl looks for guys that fit this profile. were just wierd i guess, GREAT FIND ttyl