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Birthday Wishs for Maatkara & catz

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Here's to champagne wishes and caviar dreams,
and cotton candy hopes and everything between.
Wishing this for two that give of them selves,
to all on Allpoetry unlike anybody else.

Birthdays were meant to be celebrated in joy,
party hearty ladies Maatkara & catz, don't be coy.
Smile for the cameras and blow out the candles,
dance till you drop let your dance steps dazzle.

Many many very happy returns to you both,
you two do alot to keep our AP afloat.
So,I send you my best in Birthday wishes,
let somebody else wash the party dishes.Ha!

This poem isn't too witty, this I'll admit is true,
but I meant every word ,"I'll toast,here's lookin at you!

                          ~~Suseann~~
                              9/8/2006


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silver winner in Broken Wings Fly contest;
Written September 8th, 2006

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  • MargaretG
    September 10, 2006
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    Your exuberance and affection in this poem are delightful, susann! Happy birthday to the classiest mods on AP!


  • myrataal silver member
    September 9, 2006
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    Joyous

    A very happy poem for two wonderful Poet friends. And yes: every word is true within your poem -- and of course it is witty! Happy birthday, you two, and thank you Suseann for a lovely post.



    Myra
    Edited on Sep 09, 9:06 p.m. because ''.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    September 9, 2006
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    Well done I want too see them dance too (Dancing with the Mods lol now thats a show just asking to be axed


  • catz Moderators member
    September 8, 2006
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    Awww.. such fun Thank you, suseann. This is such a sweet and kindly poem for our birthdays. It sure makes it less traumatic to being on my way to 70 ...of course getting old is far better than the alternative.

    Thank you so much for this eautiful birthday wish

    Dee


  • Kari gold member
    September 8, 2006
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    Good Luck!

    This was so very good You did a wonderful job on this poem. The very best of luck to you in the contest!

    Kari


  • Autumn Whisper
    September 8, 2006
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    Excellent poem suseann, I thought it was witty. Well done, a fab piece. I wish you the best of luck in the contest and happy birthday Maatkara and catz,
    best wishes as always
    Autumn Whisper


  • Maatkara gold member
    September 8, 2006
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    Aaw, this is an absolutely lovely poem, suse!

    Thank you so much, dear heart, I know Dee will love it too

    Yeah, I'm being taken out to dinner.. so no dishes for me to do,

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