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Coloured Dreams

 



Loneliness aint killing me no more
It has been with me far too long
Lipstick grasped from unused drawer
Now colours the lyrics in a song

 

Am I the only one

 

Who was the lonely one

 

Am I the only one

 

Who waited for something


I felt the nudge…0f my dejected time
Took a little time to breath
From now on my time is mine
And the most important thing is me

 

Now Im not the lonely one

I have my dreams to build upon

I am stronger now that your gone

Stronger than you know

 

Author notes

This is for a most lovely lady and a wonderful poet Sieara.
Her presance on AP should not go unnoticed.
Written September 8th, 2006

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  • georgie girl
    September 20, 2006
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    BRILL BRILL BRILL GIVE ME SOME STRENGHT

    I HOPE YOU ARE NOT LONELY!STRONG YOU ARE I WISH I WAS HAS STRONG AS YOU,THE CONFIDENT ONE,INDEPENDANT LILLY,

    I LOVE YOU

  • pozo
    September 16, 2006
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    This is a great poem with good use of enjambment. Good use of repetition here. I liked your powerful imagery. This was an interesting narrative poem. Keep writing, this was a very strong poem. This was quite a hopeful piece.
    Thanks for your comment
    All the best
    Pozo


  • princesspaige
    September 10, 2006
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    Very Good Libra i'm so happy to have such a tallented Nnna!! You have done such a wonderdful job on this excellent work!
    sorry that i couldent comment soner i've had the flew! Hope
    to see some more poems from you soon...
    From paige stay safe and well!! Keep It up....

  • Libra
    September 9, 2006
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    Sie I was thinking of you when I wrote this lovey, wanted to let you know that you have so much to give, never give up hope

  • Lora
    September 9, 2006
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    Terrific! It drew me from the beginning to the end. Beautiful penning. We all have to take time to off from life to reacess things and adjust and mourn,as long as we don't take forever. Then, there is the time that we are nudged into living again, getting on with life. It can take such an effort to leave that lonely time behind, as if it has a hold on us. I enjoyed your insight and the wording so much. Keep on and God bless, Lora


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 9, 2006
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    This is an amazing piece my friend! Wow!! Wish I could write like this. I liked what Larry said, your pen captured this piece from beginning to end. I am at a loss for words!


  • September 8, 2006
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    terrific

    Terrific Barb. this sounds like a song dear poet. Strong from beginning to end. I love the theme too. We are The One. Your pen has really captured in words a deeper understanding and matureity that comes through self reflection. I really enjoyed reading this very much. Remember you are the ONE> God Bless--


  • XxMissundastoodxX
    September 8, 2006
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    Wow Libra that was empowering! The strength in your words mirrors the strength of your character...
    I hope I feel that strong some day!
    Thanks for sharing,
    Hope you are well-
    Mareta

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