Much happiness to me you bring
When you are near my soul does sing
All of my cares and woes take wing
Great happening, great happening
Life with you is replete with zing
Ever singing, ever dancing
Hugging, kissing, true romancing
Ecstatic fling, ecstatic fling
Eternally to you I'll cling
For darling you're my everything
Of that there is no questioning
My bells you ring, my bells you ring.
Author notes
Written September 8th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- "Any Subject and any size" by FallenAngel09.
400 points, ended September 24, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What's Up With That? Contest by JeannieD Hunter.
900 points, ended September 29, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haven't had one of these in a while... by Luckintheshadows.
700 points, ended December 1, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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First off .... wow each line ended in the same rhyme
that is awesom. I can not do that. the meaning of this poem is also just so crystal clear. you are a great writer and poet.
Riftkin -
I have to admit this is the first Monotetra I have read. I really enjoyed it. You are very good at it. No way could I do it. Well done. Thank you for entering and good luck.
Jeannie -
These are good monorhymes and the poem is very whimsical and sweet. I love the rhyme of "ever dancing / true romancing". I'm not that fond of monotetra because of the refrain, but you make it fun.
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This flowed so well, it danced across my mind. I really did enjoy this. Good luck to you in this contest {I hope you win!}
~*destiny*~ -
Thanx for entering my contest, your talent and hard work are much appreciated. I liked the last line of every stanza, the repeating thing was really good. Great poem and i hope you do well.
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