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Happy B-day Queen




So, you’ve finally done it
You’re atop that ole hill
Living so long
Must be a great thrill

The view from up there
Must be a delight
You can see forever
All through the night

So many candles
Lit on the cake
A bonfire burning
With you it partakes

I wish you the best
On your birthday endeavor
Just stay atop that ole hill
Forever and ever









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Written September 8th, 2006

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  • phoenixonfire
    September 19, 2006
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    loved it

    this is sweet and full of ur love and affections for the sweet girl and u must be glad that queen loved it..this is really well written wishes..i loved this one..
    preeti.

  • Warrior7
    September 8, 2006
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    Oh this is just wonderful and i see Queen loves it.. You are so awesome Dove


  • queen Moderators member
    September 8, 2006
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    I LOVE IT Thank you so much for the special poem, i will treasure it


  • Partners In Crime
    September 8, 2006
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    Yeaaaa for Queen. Happy Birthday!!

  • Ir.muse
    September 8, 2006
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    hi there,

    It's a very nice poem for all whose birthday is on September.
    Wish you the best.

    Shahrzad

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